You have provided a proficient understanding and analysis of your ancillary texts, explaining what decisions were made and why, as well as mentioning where ideas were taken from and how you came to a final decision for the group products.
You need to: 1) Include pictures to support points made 2) Check phrasing of sentences to ensure you a clearly stating what you did and why
You have provided a proficient understanding and analysis of your ancillary texts, explaining what decisions were made and why, as well as mentioning where ideas were taken from and how you came to a final decision for the group products.
ReplyDeleteYou need to:
1) Include pictures to support points made
2) Check phrasing of sentences to ensure you a clearly stating what you did and why